GoofyNutNightmare's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Death Man]

lol

[cavefolder: closure]

Seeing Wavetro's CLOSURE video definitely reminded me of this. I'm sure that Wavetro got a lot of influence from this video when making that final vid.

[Beware the Milk (Maya animation)]

A modern art masterpiece

[CLOSURE]

Wish u the best of luck out there, man. Peace

[Jesus' Betrayal : What Really Went Down]

I was laughing all the way through! This is fantastic!

[im eating goldfish]

Still as great as when I first saw it. I love you Wavetro

[moving in (Teddy and Ben)]

Great to have you back

[25th Birthday]

I'm wondering what the escape in the end is representative of in Andy's life. Really really good.

[Benny's Nightmare]

You're getting better! I would say that there were a few spots where there was a pause that just went on for a lil' too long (such as at 1:25). These pauses can be shorten a bit. I also think that the voices of certain characters are barely understandable.

If you really want to go the extra mile, the animation could use more music. Music can really make an animation more memorable. Lookin at 4:30, this should feel like a scary moment and yet it lacks that last push to make it truly memorable. I know that music can be a little hard to come by, I would probably suggest looking for some copyright-safe music around Newgrounds or Youtube.

Otherwise it's a really good toon, I especially liked the visual at 2:32. Just keep working and you'll fix those last few tweaks. Once you fixed those, you can really start focusing on making a truly memorable cartoon. Keep up the good work!

PinkCreature responds:

Hey thank you so much man your advice helps me out a lot! The only thing I could fix was the music I add some on YouTube. But the characters that aren’t understandable I’m not sure about. Do you mean like the audio quality was poor or that the way the spoke was weird?

[My Birthday Suit | SAFE MODE: 01]

So the saga continues! Honestly wasn't expecting more from the Interface universe, so I'm really excited to see what comes next!